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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 2, 2008 14:19:18 GMT -5
Shiningpaw entered the ThunderClan camp, fresh-kill clamped in her jaws. She deposited the fresk-kill neatly on the pile and chose a vole for herself. She padded over to the apprentice's den. She sat there, picking lightly at it. She sighed after a few moments and yowled, "I'm bored!!!"
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Post by -beary- on Jul 2, 2008 23:18:26 GMT -5
Stormeyes narrowed his eyes suspisciously. "How can you be bored in THunderClan when there are so many things to do? I mean, you can hunt, you can help out poor dapplepaw in the medicine cat den and Windstar clean out the mess in the elder's den." Stormeyes narrowed his eyes again. He sensed some fear among the apprentice. "Dont worry, I'm always like this. Get used to it. The toughness and all."
Right then, Windstar padded next to Shiningpaw. "Senior Warrior Stormeyes is right. You must NOT have something to not do in camp. We might even have a drought. Havent you noticed the weather?" He said as he sighed.
ooc; try 2 paragraphs. More interesting;) but great job. |
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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 3, 2008 14:45:38 GMT -5
Shiningpaw sighed and stood up. "I've already been hunting. I've been hunting all day!" She complained. "And I've been trying to help the elders, but they threw me out cause they said I talked too much!" She blinked thoughtfully. "Well, they didn't use those exact words. I don't even know what they've said. It's just, one minute I'm searching for ticks and the next I'm outside on my back and they were glaring at me telling me I talked too much! I mean, is that crazy or what?" She continued chattering.
Venompaw walked up and stuffed a mouse in her sister's mouth, effectively shutting Shiningpaw up. Venompaw glared into Shiningpaw's eyes. "You do talk too much. And too loud! I was just resting after hunting and patroling all day. I hoped for a little bit of rest, but am I able to get that? No! And it's all because of your," Venompaw poked her sister with a forepaw, " big," another poke, "MOUTH!" She pushed Shiningpaw over.
(Better?)
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Post by -beary- on Jul 3, 2008 16:32:08 GMT -5
Stormeyes stared at the two apprentices with a slight amusement in his face. He smiled and grinned. "Wow, you guys are sure great brothers and sisters! When I was little, I had a brother named Cougarpaw, but then he died during a battle. He used to fight with me like what you guys just did!" Stormeyes tried to remember the details.
Windstar shifted around his place. He stood up and finally said, "Do you guys know where Blizzardpaw is? I need to tell him something about his mentoring. After all, he does need a mentor, doesnt he? (just say that his mentor died?)" Windstar mewed. He was going to assign the noble Stormeyes to be Blizzardpaw's mentor. Stormeyes was a very skilled hunter and a defiant fighter. He trains his apprentices until they are as great as he is, or even better.
ooc; haha. sure^^
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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 3, 2008 16:58:29 GMT -5
(Sure, his mentor...was killed by a badger! Let's go with that!)
Venompaw and Shiningpaw thought. Shiningpaw's tongue stuck out of her mouth in concentration. "I think....he's..." Venompaw thought.
Shiningpaw interuppted her. "He told me, this morning, that he was going to spend the day working on his climbing." She said. "He doesn't like high places very much, but he's working on overcoming that." She said with a small smile. Venompaw hid her grin.
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Post by -beary- on Jul 4, 2008 0:09:59 GMT -5
"Well, thats fine. As long as he survives back here as safe as a prick, then we will be able to tell him the news about his new mentor. You know...how Haretail died...it was so sad." Windstar murmured. "Well, as soon as he gets back, tell him to meet me in my den. "Meanwhile, Stormeyes, lets go. We've got to discuss the training." Stormeyes nodded quickly and followed Windstar towards his den up high in the rocks that was covered with vines that was above the Nursery. ooc; haretail! |
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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 4, 2008 17:33:15 GMT -5
(Ooh, I like that name! Mind if I use it in my Warriors story?? I still need ShadowClan and RiverClan cats.)
Shiningpaw and Venompaw nodded and watched the two much older cats leave. Then Shiningpaw whipped around and stared at Venompaw with wide, excited eyes. "Let's go find Blizzardpaw!" She shouted, prancing around her sister.
Venompaw watched Shiningpaw, her eyes narrowing. "No, you go." She told her sister. "I think I'll go help the elders, since you don't shut up enough to help!" She mewed.
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Post by -beary- on Jul 5, 2008 13:57:42 GMT -5
ooc ; thats alright. LOL that was just a random name I thought of xD
Stormeyes padded right beside Windstar through his den. Once they got in, a cool breeze blew across Stormeye's face, making him feel refreshed after being in the hot sun for almost a moon, making his fur dried up and dull. He observed the things around the den, there were vines bordering the entrance of the cave and rocks were piled up neatly at one side while moss and bedding were neatly arranged on the other. "This is a very nice den." Stormeyes commented.
"Yes it is, I made it myself, except for the natural stuff like the rocks and the shape of the cave." Windstar replied. He sat down on the cold stone floor and started explaining, "Now, the reason that I wanted you to come here was to talk about the training of Blizzardpaw. I understand your previous apprentice, Sprinklefur, just became a warrior, but we need apprentices turn into warriors fast so that we dont get attacked and leave without winning. Not trying to be selfish here, just thinking about the clan's protection."
Stormeyes thought for a while. "That might be good. I think Blizzardpaw will be a great apprentice for me. I will teach him to be couragous and not a coward. I will teach him to learn the ways of the warrior code." Stormeyes spoke boldly.
"Those are strong words for a small cat like you, Stormeyes." Windstar started saying. "Dont get me wrong, we will announce the naming ceremony tomorrow at dawn. Now, you need to inform Blizzardpaw." Stormeyes nodded, hurt by the leaders words...Those are strong words for a small cat like you, stormeyes... the words lurked throughout Stormeyes's head like a mocking bird.
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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 5, 2008 14:14:29 GMT -5
Venompaw marched away, her tail held high and her nose in the air. Shiningpaw stared after her, her eyes narrowed. "Don't hold your nose so high! A bug might get stuck in there!" Shiningpaw yowled after her sister. She sighed and looked around. Maybe somebody would want to go with her?
Venompaw reacked the elders den but paused and looked back at her sister. Shiningpaw was walking in circles. Why, Venompaw couldn't say. She shrugged. 'Shiningpaw is just wierd like that.' She decided.
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Post by -beary- on Jul 5, 2008 14:19:37 GMT -5
Stormeyes padded out of the den, disappointed, with the weather and what Windstar had just said to him. He felt a big nut stuck inside his throat that couldnt and wouldnt move after so much swallows of saliva. Stormeyes felt the hot sun beating down on his fur, making him twitch with anger and curiousity. He padded near Venompaw and Shinningpaw and mewed, "Have you found Blizzardpaw yet ? Dear StarClan, I wonder where he is..." |
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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 5, 2008 17:36:33 GMT -5
Shiningpaw blinked up at Stormeyes. "I have a good idea of where he is, but Venompaw won't come with me to find him!" She paced in a circle. "And I don't know anyone else that will come with me!" She sighed. "I guess I'll just get him myself."
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Post by -beary- on Jul 6, 2008 1:08:17 GMT -5
Stormeyes nodded in approvement and agreement. "Let's both go, in case something bad happened..." He narrowed his eyes as he followed SHiningpaw out of THunderclan camp and into the hunting area, "He might be practicing hunting..." Stormeyes thought as he surveyed the serene area. The hot sun blazed down on his fur making him twitch every few seconds and wimper to himself. |
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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 6, 2008 14:58:24 GMT -5
Shiningpaw bounded into the forest. "If he is hunting, then he's a dirty liar for telling me he was climbing!" She called over her shoulder. Shiningpaw was glad of her short white fur. The wind from her running ran much smoother through the short hairs than for a long-haired cat. 'Like Blizzardpaw.' She thought. Shiningpaw pictured Blizzardpaw climbing until sunhigh and then collapsing on his way back from dehydration. The thought that Blizzardpaw might collapse because he was stupid enough to not drink the entire day made her go a little faster.
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Post by -beary- on Jul 6, 2008 16:52:07 GMT -5
"If that little apprentice to be is gone and dead, then we will be very mad and disappointed." Stormeyes growled to himself as he padded through the hot forest with the thickets around the forest borders brushing his side and the soil on the ground stick to his paws. The water in the lake splash hungrily at the sea shore, making a hissing sound. "Oh, I scent Blizzardpaw!" Stormeyes narrowed his eyes. |
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Post by S H I N I N G♥; on Jul 6, 2008 19:40:54 GMT -5
Shiningpaw had scented him as well. She looked around and opened her eyes wide, straining to catch a glimpse of his white fur. There he was. Blizzardpaw was stalking a few fox lengths away, Thing was, he was sneaking up on a tree. Shiningpaw grinned almost evilly and crouched low, drawing one paw in front of her silently. She leapt at Blizzardpaw the same time Blizzardpaw jumped toward the tree. She collided with him in mid-air, landing in a roll. They stopped with Shiningpaw ontop of him. Blue sparkling eyes met amber infuriated ones. "SHININGPAW!!!" Blizzardpaw yowled. He began cursing every cat curse word he could think of. Shiningpaw jumped away from him and backed away, her eyes wide in shock and....a but of hurt.
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