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Post by :Night:Hawk: on Aug 2, 2008 14:19:36 GMT -5
( basics )
name
--- Leafeyes
gender
--- Tom
age
--- 25 moons
clan
--- Windclan
rank
--- Deputy
( physical / Appearances)
quick DESCRIPTION
---Black and white tom with leaf green eyes, and long tail.
overall
--- Leafeyes is a pretty big, muscular and handsome feline. His fur is a silk, soft Black and white mixed together that look like clouds, also theirs stripes of silver along his tail. His eyes, his eyes are a marvelous forest green, they are his most distinctive and handsome feature. They are glow and seem to shine in the night, or sun. His eyes are the thing that got him his name, Leafeyes. His tail is long and flexible, and it seems to always be moving in some direction. His fur’s pretty thick, and blows in the breeze. His nose is black, and his whiskers are medium long and white. His size is as said before, as big as a regular sized cat, but his strength is amazing, he’s one of the strongest Windclan cats in the clan.
( personality )
likes
---- Being friendly to others
- Making others feel good about themselves, and doing his best at everything.
- Traing hard, and working hard.
- Staying loyal to his clan
- Being truthful and respectful
dislikes
---- Being serious when needed to be.
- Not failing, and keeping the clan safe.
- Staying true to the code and always giving it his all.
- Being charming and sly.
overall
Leafeyes, a true cat to the code. He’s loyal, and trustworthy, along with that, he’s brave, and courageous. He’s as wise as time itself, even though he isn’t the oldest. When he does his depudy duties, he takes that extreamly seriously, and makes sure everything’s done right. He’s a nice and caring tom, that has soft spots for kits and others. He’s understanding and would do anything to help out his fellow clan mates. He’s respectful and polite to the elders and to almost everyone. If he doesn’t like someone, he won’t show it, he’s not that low. In battle, he’s fierce and strong, he’ll fight to the end and not give up. He doesn’t like to fail, he wants to win every battle he faces. He’s a hard worker, and trains to keep up his strength and skills. He’s a very good fighter and hunter, he was the perfect choice for deputy. He can be sly and charming sometimes. Overall, he’s a very nice and loyal cat.
sample post
A pair of glowing, illuminating green eyes stared out of the bush, long tail twitching as he gazed at the woodland mouse. Mouth watering, but Leafeyes knew that the clan must be fed first, and he wouldn’t break the code, ever. His muscles were tense as he gained up some strength, he prepared to leap at the dumb, unknowing mouse when, he heard a sound behind him. The deputy’s ears shot up and he turned swifly around to stare into the small space of forest he was hunting in. He tasted the air and smelled……Shadowclan!
( history )
family
Birdsong- mother
Cloudfur- father
none- sister&brothers
kit
As a kit, Leafkit was always the serious one, he didn’t play that much, and liked to be left alone to watch the warriors come in and out of camp with prey, or if they were going or returning on a patrol. His leaf green eyes always shown brightly as he watched, he always proded his parents to let him go out and watch and warriors train their apprentices. But, they always said he was too young, and might get hurt. But, Leafkit wasn’t scared…he wasn’t scared of anything.
When the time came for one of the gatherings, Leafkit had snuck out, because his mother, Birdsong was asleep, and his farther had went to the gathering. Leafkit was a pro at sneaking outside the camp. He loved the wind in his fur as he ran along the vally, it was that night when he almost got killed by a stray dog…Leafkit was, he admitted, pretty scared, he ran for his life as he saw the big white dog coming at him, his big teeth showing in the moonlight. Leafkit was trapped, when he got to a hollow, dog hot on his heels. As Leafkit turned around to go another way, the dog’s teeth were almost on his neck. Just then, Leafkit jumped back,and did what he had seen one of the apprentices did, when showing their fellow apprenticemates what he had learned that day when out training. Leafkit’s paw shot up and grazed the dog across the muzzle and he shot down his side, running as fast as the wind, and bite into his tail hard, making the dog howl in pain. Then, Leafkit shot off as fast as any jack rabbit towards Windclan camp.
No, one had ever found out about that incident, but he didn’t care, he knew he had done it, and was pretty proud, it was one of the scariest moments of his life… When the time came for Leafkit to be made an apprentice, the night before the time, he had gone into the leader’s den, and asked him if he thought he was ever good enough to be leader, or deputy one day. The leader smiled and said that Leafkit could do whatever he pushed himself to do, and train hard and long to become of such a high rank. Leafkit’s eyes glowed at that and so he went along thinking he could do it, and no one could stop him!
apprentice
When Leafkit became, Leafpaw, he had been mentored by a tom called, Rushingwind. Those two bonded so well, and on the first training session, he had done so well, that Rushinghawk invited him on the first patrol he had ever been on! Leafpaw had mastered the hunters’ crouthch in no time, and had already learned two battle moves! Oh, did I mention that Rushingwind was the depudy at the time? Well, yeah. XD
Now, Leafpaw was really pumpted, he was getting really strong, and he had made friends with all the apprentices. His best friend, Luckypaw, was always there for him, they always hung out and went hunting. Leafpaw liked to hunt rabbits the most, they were a challenge. As for being the best, Leafpaw was really good, but there was this one apprentice that could beat him. But, no matter, Leafpaw trained really harder, and loved to challenge the apprentice, Darkpaw to hunting games, or racing games. They ended up being really good friends after all that, and still are.
Leafpaw was out on a patrol one time and said he was gonna stay out and hunt longer, so the patrol left him out in the vally. Leafpaw’s eyes were narrowed, he wasn’t really gonna hunt more, even though he said, he thought he had heard someone, or something, but he didn’t wanna get the whole patrol worked up, or the clan. Breezestar was already getting sicker…So, Leafpaw had gone out and tracked done the cat he had scented, who was on the border of Wind and loner territory. He had jumped out at the strange cat. Who he soon learned was named, Buck. Buck, was a lost and wounded young tom, who was pleading for him to help. So, being the nice cat he was, Leafpaw took him to camp and the medicine cat healed his wounds, and now Buck has joined Windclan and their really best friends, along with Luckypaw, after that Leafpaw became a warrior…
warrior
Leafpaw became, Leafeyes, in honor of his leaf green eyes of course. He loved his name! It was awesome. So, he got an apprentice as well, guess who….Buck! He was an apprentice technically, so he trained his friend, and they sure got along well. Leafeyes taught him everything he knew, Leafeyes had learned a lot of moves, and was very strong and powerful looking tom now indeed. He had gotten bigger and more hansome, which attracted the attention of a lot of she-cats. But, he was focusing more on training Buck, so, after about a moon or so, of hard traing, and all. Leafeyes gave Buck an assessment, and Buck did really well. And as Leafeyes was watching his progress, two rogues appeared…
Leafeyes’s eyes had widened and fur brisled. Buck was in danger, no way could he take on those two. So, Leafeyes had jumped into battle and slashed and bite roughly at the two tresspassers. Blood was spilt and Leafeyes won. He had gotten a few scratches, atleast Buck had helped him along the way. They had retured to camp, Leafeyes had told Breezestar everything that happened. So, with that, Buck became a warrior, because of his couraginous and braveness. Leafeyes was happy that his friend became a warrior.
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Post by -beary- on Aug 2, 2008 19:44:22 GMT -5
accepted! but there are some spelling errors. but thats alright, accepted!
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Post by :Night:Hawk: on Aug 2, 2008 20:04:08 GMT -5
oh, sorry.! Xd...but..I wasn't really done...but, I'll add the deputy stuff in alittle bit. XD
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